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Reviews For: Within these Hallowed Halls

Meredith
2003-12-11
ch 1,
This is really great! Your vivid words really help portray a picture. I especially like the lines
"Ghosts of children lost
lingering through the corridors,
mingling with the present future
souls"
It really summarizes some thoughts and feelings that I had while reading this.
~meredith
Jesi Lynna
2003-11-08
ch 1,
*jaw drops* amazing.. that's just how I feell

GET OUT OF MY HEAD!

loved it!
aulliana
2003-11-08
ch 1,
Thanx for reviewing my poetry (and respecting my religion...rock on!!) Anyway, I just thought I'd return the favor. I really liked this. It reminds me of the way I felt at the beginning of the year, now that all my friends from the c/o 2003 have graduated and gone away.
Keep writing and blessed be,
~~aulliana~~
Victor Soulstorm
2003-11-03
ch 1,
another great work of art.
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