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| Meredith 2003-12-11 ch 1, | This is really great! Your vivid words really help portray a picture. I especially like the lines "Ghosts of children lost lingering through the corridors, mingling with the present future souls" It really summarizes some thoughts and feelings that I had while reading this. ~meredith |
| Jesi Lynna 2003-11-08 ch 1, | *jaw drops* amazing.. that's just how I feell GET OUT OF MY HEAD! loved it! |
| aulliana 2003-11-08 ch 1, | Thanx for reviewing my poetry (and respecting my religion...rock on!!) Anyway, I just thought I'd return the favor. I really liked this. It reminds me of the way I felt at the beginning of the year, now that all my friends from the c/o 2003 have graduated and gone away. Keep writing and blessed be, ~~aulliana~~ |
| Victor Soulstorm 2003-11-03 ch 1, | another great work of art. |