Interesting. Not many stories have the male as mythical, and the girl as human. Annoying, really, especially when one is looking for fae-boy/human-girl relationships. They're all, "Princess Elven girl..." "Warrior elven girl..." "Half-blood elven girl..." "Human boy falls for his fae companion.." etc etc. Boring as all **.

Pity you won't be continuing with this.

Update, please? :) Aidan's such a cute, funny, quirky, slightly-annoying-in-a-good-way character. I really want to see what happens next. Please update your stories. Thanks.

oh. no. baad... not good that he just... blurted out everything.

interesting story. I like.

:) CD

OH! Elves, magic, and evil, OH MY! It's really good so far! Update? Please?

Wow! i absolutly love aiden when he goes childish! so adorable! and karen loves him already *sigh* lol

I glared at him as he, grinning, forced me to slide down the rail, and fall off the edge, hitting the ground hard - *is cracking up* i did that! lol...it hurt..*gasps for air* how do you get these ides...*remembers* ..i did that...wait ..@.@ LOL hahahahaha

Ah this is so funny lol i love the way you write! wow you must know some totally crazy peopel...and..or maybe actually be crazy yourself...but thats good! We are only born with a spark of insanity! we must not loose it!lol

I liked the set up here... the only part I didn't like was the very beginning... the first bit of the conversation at the lunch table. It was a bit difficult to follow, and didn't really capture my interest. After that first part, though, I really liked it. You did a good job of setting her up as a perfectly normal girl.

*gasps in awe* You updated...eh. Sorry. ^^ Aidan got caught under a spell...o...wonder what's gonna happen next? ^^ KEEP WRITING!

um... what is with the butt ugly ext.?
other than that, really good, except I can't remember all of it *cringe*. um- could you try to explain more and such...? You know, about what the exact Chosen is and all..

Hi! I really like ur story, it's hilarious! plz update soon!

PLEASE WRITE MORE! (i finally read it)

aw, yay! please update! me likes dis story!

o! you just can't leave me on a cliffhanger like this! update soon please! i love this story! it's so good!plus you put archer in! ya! he's my fav character. so anyways keep up the awesome work and update soon please! i want to know what happens!

Still funny . . . I love this fic, it's going on favorites. Maybe someone should manage to kidnap her. That would be kind of spiffy . . .