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| Mistress DragonFlame 2007-09-01 ch 11,   | Interesting. Not many stories have the male as mythical, and the girl as human. Annoying, really, especially when one is looking for fae-boy/human-girl relationships. They're all, "Princess Elven girl..." "Warrior elven girl..." "Half-blood elven girl..." "Human boy falls for his fae companion.." etc etc. Boring as all **. Pity you won't be continuing with this. |
| La. 2006-04-03 ch 11, | Update, please? :) Aidan's such a cute, funny, quirky, slightly-annoying-in-a-good-way character. I really want to see what happens next. Please update your stories. Thanks. |
| Casey Drake 2006-02-17 ch 11, | oh. no. baad... not good that he just... blurted out everything. interesting story. I like. :) CD |
| Para Noya 2005-09-12 ch 11, | OH! Elves, magic, and evil, OH MY! It's really good so far! Update? Please? |
| Indubidably 2005-04-06 ch 11, | Wow! i absolutly love aiden when he goes childish! so adorable! and karen loves him already *sigh* lol |
| Indubidably 2005-04-06 ch 4, | I glared at him as he, grinning, forced me to slide down the rail, and fall off the edge, hitting the ground hard - *is cracking up* i did that! lol...it hurt..*gasps for air* how do you get these ides...*remembers* ..i did that...wait ..@.@ LOL hahahahaha |
| Indubidably 2005-04-06 ch 3, | Ah this is so funny lol i love the way you write! wow you must know some totally crazy peopel...and..or maybe actually be crazy yourself...but thats good! We are only born with a spark of insanity! we must not loose it!lol |
| SysheKieriLiandrin 2004-07-12 ch 1, | I liked the set up here... the only part I didn't like was the very beginning... the first bit of the conversation at the lunch table. It was a bit difficult to follow, and didn't really capture my interest. After that first part, though, I really liked it. You did a good job of setting her up as a perfectly normal girl. |
| pixy-dizzy 2004-04-20 ch 11, | *gasps in awe* You updated...eh. Sorry. ^^ Aidan got caught under a spell...o...wonder what's gonna happen next? ^^ KEEP WRITING! |
| Liza Lew 2004-04-20 ch 11, | um... what is with the butt ugly ext.? other than that, really good, except I can't remember all of it *cringe*. um- could you try to explain more and such...? You know, about what the exact Chosen is and all.. |
| Autumn-Rose1942 2004-04-09 ch 10, | Hi! I really like ur story, it's hilarious! plz update soon! |
| Liza Lew 2003-12-03 ch 10, | PLEASE WRITE MORE! (i finally read it) |
| pixy-dizzy 2003-12-01 ch 10, | aw, yay! please update! me likes dis story! |
| Hermux Tantamoq 2003-12-01 ch 9, | o! you just can't leave me on a cliffhanger like this! update soon please! i love this story! it's so good!plus you put archer in! ya! he's my fav character. so anyways keep up the awesome work and update soon please! i want to know what happens! |
| lynx wings 2003-11-28 ch 9, | Still funny . . . I love this fic, it's going on favorites. Maybe someone should manage to kidnap her. That would be kind of spiffy . . . |