Good imagry on the most part... however the flow was not too good in my opinion

Very nice poem. I especially liked the lines Daddy's little dancer
Has quite a little secret and Daddy hasn't got a little dancer anymore
What he's a broken ballerina! GREAT JOB! Please keep writing because I love your work *blushes and wishes she was a better writer* lol
*Emmy*

Are you kidding me? You write beautifully! Your summaries don't do you justice...that's the only complaint i have :-P

Wow. This was quite beautiful. I loved the last stanza. Very good. I liked the potrayal of innocence to well, the loss of innocence. Nice one!

Nice analogy.

That was really good. Your talented.

Great write!