|Reviews for Broken Ballerina|
| Soviet 9/17/04 . chapter 1
Good imagry on the most part... however the flow was not too good in my opinion
| Emerald Lynne Stonne 1/22/04 . chapter 1
Very nice poem. I especially liked the lines Daddy's little dancer
Has quite a little secret and Daddy hasn't got a little dancer anymore
What he's a broken ballerina! GREAT JOB! Please keep writing because I love your work *blushes and wishes she was a better writer* lol
| Dawn of Fire 12/27/03 . chapter 1
Are you kidding me? You write beautifully! Your summaries don't do you justice...that's the only complaint i have :-P
| Wind Blown Hair 11/10/03 . chapter 1
Wow. This was quite beautiful. I loved the last stanza. Very good. I liked the potrayal of innocence to well, the loss of innocence. Nice one!
| creatureofnite 11/6/03 . chapter 1
| mrbubblesandme 11/3/03 . chapter 1
That was really good. Your talented.
| pleasecometrue 11/2/03 . chapter 1