Tehe... for some odd reason, that just makes me laugh. Which is upsetting and somewhat odd. Okay, very odd. But yes, it's an interesting and somewhat amusing poem.

Such a *cringes* beautiful poem. It made me cry (because of the beautiful imigary and the horrible things the imigary brought. I love it. I know it's been said before, but where do I find scorpions? My brother has started one fight too many.

Twisted things make me smile:)

"Kitten in a blender."

this one has lots of great (though violent...but in a cool way, of course) imagery.

xoxo LlaMa Rachel

*sniff* *sniff* I am soo proud of you. You have surpassed yourself, brilliant, simply brilliant. *dries eyes* Soo soo proud...
~kitish

Heh . . . very cool. *takes notes* I don't suppose this is modeled after Lock, Shock and Barrel's song in The Nightmare Before Christmas, is it? *smiles* Either way, it's deliciously gruesome - well done.
Tenika Dargan

hi! this is freaky! well done! funny though!
cya =)


- winged girl

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(goes away to find some scorpions for little sister)

hahahahahahahahaha you HAVE TO write more of these! I LOVED IT! made me crack up!! yes, i do enjoy the though of shackeling my bro to the bed and covering him in scorpions... ^sigh^ what a beautiful, selfless poem.

I LOVE THIS!
I AM A SICK SICK PERSON, YES!
*drools*