 MiriamP 2003-11-02 . chapter 1Do you kill yourself each day? If not, then this poem is exaclty your day... It was nice, although I would suggest either inserting nouns in each stanza or sticking to verbs. I liked it though, and if it is your life, don't let your mother get to you. I have most possibly the most involved, bossy, ect mother... Not everything she says is true. |