Ah new material. All my favourites haven't been updated in fovever so I started lookign around and low and behold I found this! And normally I would be have a fit of what I refer to as "OMG-ness" but I happen to be in a public place. But enough of useless information that you could care less about...It's great! Simply put of course. And I feel the addiction starting already. I love people you can write stories that have me addicted like it's crack cocaine or something. So good job, very good job.

I like it! You should write more!

Write more. Or I'll cry. Seriously, you haven't written since November. It's too early into the story for me to come up with any changes, but I like it the way it is, so *Thumbs up*.

So far it sounds like it could turn out to be an interesting story; i like the first part. PLease continue.

WHOA! Can this be?? Talent! I am most surprised to have stumbled upon the writings of someone who knows what they're doing. This is really well written. I can't find a thing to critique, except to say that I can't wait for more.

Please avoid using "anyways" so many times. Maybe I'm just picky, but I think it makes the passage sound too ditzy and takes away from the emphasis.
Watch your "its" vs. "it's." "It's" is a contraction of "it is." "Its" is the plural form of "it."
Also, I think the character development is starting out a little too stereotypically. (Or maybe I just read too much slash.) XD

I'm really liking it. I am. I've been there, the whole, "wow that person's hot. . .wait. . .same gender. . .what?" It's a crazy feeling. . .anyway, I can't wait to read more.
And thanks for your nifty review! I appreciate it!

Wow...this is amazing! I know that feeling...when you see this utterly gorgeous person and you're all nervous. Then you realize that it's the same sex. Then you get all squeemish 'n stuff...I can totally relate. Very nice, can't wait for the next chappie! *gives a gold star* n.n

^_^ Great start! Please update soon! You have so much talent and this chapter totally caught me! Keep it up!