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BandChik 2005-11-29 . chapter 1
Obviously you're horribly and emotionally scarred by your mother trying to make you more feminine *note the doll* and it's sufficating you. That and a mix of too many horror movies...

Good detail though, perhaps a bit too good, if I yell at you in class tomorrow, you'll know I'm visioning the people nailed to walls and the little girl dieing... *shudder*
Agathy 2004-03-02 . chapter 1
Your descriptions are great...I used to remember most of my dreams with as much detail, but I've never had recurring dreams (especially not nightmares with psycho killer dolls!). And even though I'm not really a fan of horror, I enjoyed reading this. I'd love to tell you what the dream means but...unfortunately, I hate trying to figure out dreams. It takes the fun out of having them (even nightmares). Please write more...and check out my stories too, if you have the time. Thanks =) I'll be looking forward to more of your work.
Firgof Umbra 2004-01-31 . chapter 1
First through seventh impressions: Silent Hill,*see above*,Cool!,Ouch,That's a nightmare,Must kill doll,Spanish?!
So there are my takes. As for what it means... *analyzing* Perhaps the doll scared you "grinning widely and nodding"
Or. Perhaps you are repressing your childhood to stop remembering something. OR even... nah. There's my (short?) analysis
Shapeshifter 2004-01-26 . chapter 1
Holy **. you've got one tortured soul there, sure wish I could help in some way.
Shade2 2004-01-09 . chapter 1
Hee hee hee, thanks for your reviews, though I found something out that's rather hilarious (to me and those who know me anyway). Apparently when a kid dreams about a doll, how they interact (the doll to the child), is how a parent-child relationship is viewed. Now what does THAT say about my mother, eh? *laughs*
Lord of the Sabres 2004-01-09 . chapter 1
THAT is a disturbing but very cool piece of work. My comment is it sucks to be you. You really need to consider writing a horror story. Seriously, one that will keep me from ever wanting to sleep again (if anybody can do it, it's you). This is gonna sound weird, but your nightmares make WAY more sense than mine. Don't ask me why, they just do. Keep up the good work (maybe a sequel will come)
amethystdawn 2003-12-10 . chapter 1
Hmm...I think it's a mixture from that stupid movie, "Jeepers Creepers" (Seems similar to the part of bodies being nailed to the wall.) I reccomend for you not to watch it though if you hadn't watched it already, it's cheap production and the plot ain't good. And maybe a favorite old toy is haunting you. It gives me the creeps to think you had that dream for a month, so scary and creepy. But, it makes a great story. Other than my explanation above, I can't think of any other reason for such a wretched and creepy nightmare. I hope it's not occuring anymore.
Aryante 2003-11-07 . chapter 1
oh, creepy. So descriptive and well-writen. damn.
Mizutaka 2003-11-05 . chapter 1
*raises eyebrow* Okay then. This is rather . . . disturbing yet humourous at the same time for some reason. Don't blame me, blame my horrid sense of humor. Anyway . . . interesting. In my opinion I'd say that the doll part seems to have some symbolistic value (no ** duh since it's pretty obvious) along with the phrase "Oh God, it hurts," and the swinging lightbulb. Most, most interesting. *cackles evily* No it's my turn to cross-examine YOU! ^_^
eric 2003-11-03 . chapter 1
Well, I see your point about your shrink being a fool for not giving you anything. This is simultaniously entertaining and scary. All i can say is that the doll thing probably has to do with childhood neglect, and im willing to bet your mother is part of it.
Mademoiselle Dodd 2003-11-03 . chapter 1
alright ducky...my analysis is as follows short though it may be it might be worth of consideration. the doll is one of the ones that is not allowed to be removed from your pink and fluffy room (which i might say is grounds for nightmares of any sort) and the force that allows you to live in the same room as the doll is what is truly oppresing you. you feel like you're being nailed down, smothered and overall being beaten with the expectations held by said force with nothing in return. but yes, you and i need to have a talk (no this is not a lecture and they never are, well there was that one time but that wasnt even you ok right shutting up)
hiki akuma 2003-11-03 . chapter 1
hm
are you afraid of death?
think on it this way you don't want to die but you constantly think about pain or death. (im not saying you do im only suggesting you might) because you are quite a gothic type person it reflects in your thoughts and parts of your subconsious mind. so what happens if you take that kinda step in life it programs your mind to think and infact dream on that basis. You control your dreams ... you just have to step back control your mind and compleatly belive you are in control then take a large weapon and slash the mosnter to death (it is a dream after all and anything you with can be counjered) ^_^
sorry i haven't mail recently
Dave.
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