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Reviews For: A Surreal Dream

the heart's pawn-shop
2005-03-04
ch 1,
'a bittersweet but tender dream' indeed! that was really well done. i love your descriptions and the way you tell a story through this little amount of text. excellent job! keep it up.-the heart's pawn-shop
Wendy
2003-11-04
ch 1,
mm...wow... very meaningful... i m kinda.. speechless lol, yeah, g2g now, cya
Crystal Snowflakes
2003-11-03
ch 1,
Ah, great job =) I would say you're writing better than I am ! =)
itk with a dark side
2003-11-03
ch 1,
This is a great story/dream it was a breath of fresh air as i was suppose to be in history class. Good keep writting and i'll keep reading.
Tony
2003-11-02
ch 1,
Wow... what can I say besides wow... like you said, bitter sweet, yet tender... love your work. Just brilliant!!
forever_blues
2003-11-02
ch 1,
It's so beautiful, tender, sweet and yet bitter. You have talent, you do, but how does he know that she doesn't have feelings for him. How does he know that she only pity him? Why so sad?
Derek
2003-11-02
ch 1,
Nice work... so tender... so touching... hehe. The beach is nice, but it's c-o-l-d... shilvers...
nice job!
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