Reviews for The Search for Comet Flemmings

Reviews For: The Search for Comet Flemmings

Adela H 2007-04-14 ch 2,	It's starting off pretty well and I agree with the other reviewer: you need to let your readers get involved with the story and let them interperet it how they see fit. I can't wait to read the next chapter! Adela H
Halcyon Impulsion 2006-04-30 ch 2,	I think this is good, and I hope you have the rest saved up somewhere and will post it :) You are good writer - I'd like to see more!
mormonboy 2005-04-26 ch 2,	Great story please continue.
mormonboy 2005-04-26 ch 1,	I can't wait to read it It is so nice to have some fiction for mormons.
Ayameko AiKage 2003-11-09 ch 2,	Hi again. I guess you had the choice to rewrite it; I thought it was fantastic the way it was, but this version is really good too - same style, same eloquent flow of words, same basic story. It sounds to me like Zack is tired, worn out from tragedy, and severely affected by it, but not so completely altered that he doesn't want to pick himself back up again. It sounds like he's willing to move on, has some well meaning in him, but nevertheless dramatically changed for the worse by the death of David. He sounds rather confused about how to move on too, considering the fact that his faith has all but disintegrated. And one more thing I have to say: you mentioned in your author's note that you want to make sure your readers are interpreting your character correctly. My idea is that you can write what you will, and just because of the diversity of the human race, people will interpret your work in different ways. After all, there's only so much information you can give your readers before they aren't being spoon-fed the whole story and have no chance to involve themselves in it. Anyway, that's just my thought, especially considering William Golding's "Lord of the Flies."

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