You explained the roles so well and made them symbolic. Great work.


~Heart of the Sword

Hey trinity...you know I'm always here to lend an ear, a hand, a liver, or any other body part or organ you may need...keep up the writing...great work...read it at the coffee house..please?!--KS

A good poem, with nice metaphorical parallels between life and us... (*not sure if I'm making sense*) Like the comparisons between the coach and referee.
Good job. *thumbs up*

Izzy J.