A nice dose of what some people need every once in a while. Though I myself prefer fantasy any day of the week. *smiles*

Really cool perspective! Very nice. I like it.

OOh very original and cool concept. I know what you mean.

It's not entirely clear what you really meant here and what was sarcastic. Are you glad that *someone* will tell you the truth, or are you mad that it destroys your hopes? I love the theme, however, and I like the way you broke the stanzas.

rantish-butnice. I do like the idea behind it. again, o

ok, so its not happy...but hey at least its less depressing than your last few poems.