Extremely well written and very moving! n_n

wonderful! im in the process of coming to terms with being bisexual and things like this are SO inspiring, i literaly cried

So beautiful! Made me cry :')

I think you did a great job with this, the only mistake I can point out is

"before we loose all our humanity"

It's "lose". I'm guessing that was just a typo though.

Nice job, I myself am bisexual and love this poem.

-Rach

xD

Wow. I liked that a lot! :)

Very well done.

its touching! But some lines didnt make sense. Try not to force a rhyme scheme if you have to.

All I have to say is: Thank you for writing this. You hit the spot perfectly.

I really, really like the ending;

"And we love them all the same

You should too".

Good poem!

Whoa! This was really moving, in my opinion. I really liked your "refrain" too. There are a few grammatical errors, but other than that it was a well written poem. Kudos to you.

I really like your poem, i really think that you helped express how gays/lesbians/bi/transgender teens feel. I do think that it's a bit repetative though.

Wow! Powerful stuff. This is very well done in my opinion, and it's not often I find songs written about same sex relationships and transgendered people. I think that it's good that somebody isn't afraid to write about the subject. Just absolutely wonderful . . . I don't know what else to say!

I like this a lot.

I definitely agree (well, obviously..P)

They make fun of the transgenders,

and they call them freaks

They call them fashion offenders,

and say "get off the steets"

Flows really well. I love a lot (:

You don't know how happy it makes me feel when I see something like this. Thank you.

Awesome.

wow, that really touched me i loved it, u made me feel good about myself (i'm bi bi the way)gr8 job!*confwuzzled*