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| Katrina Gabrielle 2005-12-31 ch 1,   | This is beautiful. It reminds me of so many things, and each line of this poem is precious. Wonderfully written, I applaud you. *faves!* |
| The Zaniak 2004-02-02 ch 1, | Wow...this was really beautiful. And it had impeccable rhyme and rhythm. Well done, this was top notch. |
| Blind Tragedy Wolf 2003-11-26 ch 1, | whoa..wicked kool o_o; That was really good. Hmm..need to read more >_> -Dai G out |
| ConfuseDAngel 2003-11-13 ch 1, | ah i'm speechless it's soo inspiring..i hope i could write something like this...the ryhmes are great, don't care about the scale because i commonly use freestyle and i like it...oh wait a minute there's still a part 2...(clicks away) |
| Keeper of Seas 2003-11-12 ch 1, | wow i really like that. i can really relate to her. keep up the good work. |
| Violent Sylence 2003-11-10 ch 1, | i like. very much. rhyming patterns are very enjoyable. i'd give you a number. but scales suck. |
| Miyabi-chan 2003-11-10 ch 1, | I'll tell you what you're supposed to do, read and review all my stories! Just kidding. :) I guess it was good, but are you sure you don't know this person? Describe her more so you can get a good vision of her in your mind. |
| elvenstorm 2003-11-09 ch 1, | This is very good! I like the repetition of the questions it really drive the point home. Great poem! |
| Ellerfru 2003-11-08 ch 1, | Interesting... I'll read part 2 before I write a detailed review. |
| Chaotic Ellipsis 2003-11-07 ch 1, | Wow, this is a truly excellent poem. I really liked it ^^U sweet, but with the air of sadness to it. Beautiful, beautiful. Thank you for brightening my day, and thank you for the review of my poem. It was greatly appreciated. Indeed shattered rose is an excellent line; heh ^^U *thumbs up* great work; ciao for now -Chaotic Ellipsis |
| MiNt-BrEaTh 2003-11-06 ch 1, | Hey! Thanx 4 reviewing my poem! Yours is great. I'm gonna read part II. Your poems really touch the heart, y'know? Great job! 5/5! |
| Incubabe 2003-11-06 ch 1, | Thanks for the review. This is a really impressive piece of work. You sucked me in with the line, "Beautiful, like a shattered rose" - that was sheer genius. I can't wait to read Her II Diana x |
| Ishuzu 2003-11-04 ch 1, | That one was my favorite of yours. Kudios |