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| Africa 2003-12-10 ch 1,   | "Wearing these hose, you can't see the scar on my knee. And if you can't see it, I can't tell you the story." Oh, cute, cute! Really cute. Clever, too. At first you're like, "why the hell would you want to see the scar?" And then you think, "Oh...cool." I liked that a lot. A little provocative, too. Has "lover" read the poem? Haha. Good job. |
| Jesi Lynna 2003-11-08 ch 1, | I don't think there's anybody out there who hasn't felt like this at least once in their life. I really really liked this poem. Keep writing PS thanks for the review of Freedom of Speech? although I don't get the Micheal Moore thing.. I don't even know who that guy is. But I have heard his name in a NOFX song. So.. its all good. |
| Donraj 2003-11-05 ch 1, | Well said. I don't know enough about poetry to comment on the structure, but from an amatuer's perspective it comes across very clearly, and is very thought-provoking. They say clothes make the man, but in reality that's just an ascribed status that conceals your reality. Thanks for writing it, I enjoyed it. |
| Moulin Rouge21 2003-11-03 ch 1, | This is gReat!! i really liked it.! Very Original! -MOulin RouGe21 |