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| PaperLanterns 2003-11-03 ch 1, | i really like the relationships between the characters in this, it's amazing. And the end was just really really powerful..."Natalie's mother turned her around, and Natalie looked smaller, withered, defeated, like a different girl, frail and strange, wearing a Natalie costume." Really amazing |