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| 2good2btru 2006-07-26 ch 1,   | its a nice story and i like the way its progressing though there is one thing i would like to know. do your vampires all walk in the day or not because i think that has happened quite often in the story unless i am mistaken anyway good luck and i am awaiting the next chapter, hope it comes up soon. |
| ^_^ 2004-12-09 ch 1, | ^_^ |
| Animus Nein-phoenix 2004-09-06 ch 1, | Have I ever mentioned how much I really think your stuff sux. I was giving it a chance to mature and yea...*shrugs*. Well not as if I ever matured much in my manner newayz eh. no offense by the way, i just feel your style is lacking. Just seems too typical for the ideas you are trying to portray. I know you may never think of putting too much thought and effort into your style but maybe you should really look into the difference it could have in your impact. um...yea bye. |
| tastes like love 2004-06-29 ch 10, | very good. One very very small problem, you used the term crone for an old man, you can't do that, crones are only old women, it's, "the maiden, the mother, and the crone thats grown old," no big, just thought I would point it out. |
| Shadow of the Light 2003-12-16 ch 11, | Now I'm wondering what Skalan/Scythe is going to do with Fiona. That was a pretty big gamble Fiona did stabbing herself and all. Nicely done. I look forward to reading more. "Still looking up at Parker, Fiona relented to the urge of Samara and let her take over her body." Maybe I am wrong but in this sentence it seems to me she would have been looking at Kael not Parker? Anywho, good job over all, can't wait to read more! =^_^= Thanks for the insightful review of my song. I'll do my best to try and fit all the right puzzle pieces in the right places! |
| saraniya 2003-12-15 ch 11, | oh dood wut up i noe i noe lotz more spellin mistakez for ya and i luv u for updatin again thanx a bunch chum guess wut guees wut guess wut i have a secret but u gotta call ma house tyo find it out *snickers while rubing her hands together* imma in sane |
| saraniyaa 2003-11-27 ch 10, | hey wut up gal sorry for all the spellin errors i cant even spell ma own name rite lol ne wayz i feel so special of who ur writin this story for sorry we cant chat as usual ne more i heard wut happened email me or call me kk luv ya moi buh bye |
| Shadow of the Light 2003-11-27 ch 10, | Excellent story, I only just caught up! I've been looking forward to reviewing to say "Its great, pleease add more soon!" well I'll let you get back to your writting, keep up the good work. =^_^= By the way I love the way you had Bridge and Parker find out about the pregnancy! |
| Dark Auro 2003-11-13 ch 9, | olah luv it luv it and letz see luv it ya i gotz nothin to say but luv u and ur story imma really happy dat u updated de story kk luv ya julez later |
| Dark Auro 2003-11-13 ch 8, | i luv u luv u luv u luv u luv u luv u luv u |