Awesome! I love it!

I'm back.. *grin*

Anyway, muchly enjoyed this.. Beautiful, tragic and moving all at once..

The poem flows well, and in some places, rather like you said 'unreal' and haunting..

The balance in the piece is well achieved, and although it was brief, you managed to bring across the point really well..

Well crafted, I enjoyed it muchly..

Shadafakup