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Broken Reflection
2005-09-13
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abuse"Dr. Schwein Burnstalker was in many ways, the ideal English professor. In that his middle name could've been "Corduroy," he got excited about James Joyce in ways that would get most people arrested, and he was batshit insane."

Madly brilliant story. Your writing is the greatest, possibly most random, thing my mind has ever explored.
KillerRabbit53
2003-11-10
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abuseGreat Stuff. Keep up the good work. Say Hi to your roommate for me.
SaxManNC
2003-11-10
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abuseHey Billiam,
Great work so far! Have you considered telling the story from 3rd person instead of 1st? I have a novel I am working on which I started in 1st person, but later went back and changed the point of view and found I had a lot more room to develop the characters. Just a suggestion, take it or leave it, perhaps a good project to try in December after we finish NaNoWriMo.
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