|Reviews for Elemental Beginnings|
| Odyssey2469 6/29/04 . chapter 3
Excellent, well thought out and written, one little note, it seemed like you were a little repetitive with your words, for example you always referred to it as a forest, try using more synonyms or something. Also you should raise your ratting level; I don’t think you can drop the F-bomb and still have it ‘G’ rated.
Yes I reviewed each chapter separately. Each was unique so I thought that each deserved its own review
Please kick the writers block and add more!
| Odyssey2469 6/29/04 . chapter 2
A great start, it could almost be a story all its own
| Odyssey2469 6/29/04 . chapter 1
Very in-depth and well thought out