I published my first poem A couple of days ago. Check it out and give me a review, I'm just checkin to see how good it is to other poetry writers.

Thanks!

o...nice...very nice. This poem was so strong that it just gave me the shivers reading it. _

weird and a little edgy but definately you

I get it, but don't you think your blowing it out of proportion? If thats all you got for a "guard" then the rest of life would not be good. High school isn't everything. Sorry Ti I love you! Don't hate me, it just what i think. bye now! ::runs::

Is this symbolism. . or are you dead serious? Please don't be serious! Even though I don't know you, I care about you! I'm not just saying that either! I really do! Please, never take your life away! You've gotta think of all those who care for you and love you! They're out there! And God loves you too!