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| Modern Poet 2003-12-29 ch 1,   | God, I so know how that feels. Great work! |
| PainKiller 2003-12-14 ch 1, | Short, but sweet, to coin the old expression. Nice sense of emotional anguish you employed here. Brilliant work with minimal wording for max effect. |
| Werecat99 2003-11-30 ch 1, | Bitter and sad, but gets the message through. Not easily done is so few words, and this shows talent. Good work. |
| anthr-gift-4m-hvn 2003-11-07 ch 1, | "... i just wish my apologies would've won." -like that much. short but gets to the point. |