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| Escapist 2004-03-03 ch 1,   | So many people need to read that first stanza and really gain a good comprehension of it. Sometimes all you can depend on, and really all you need is friends, right? |
| anthr-gift-4m-hvn 2003-11-07 ch 1, | oh, i like this one very much. you're such a good friend to everybody! lol. i like the last stanza a lot. nice, nice. |
| Keep it 100 2003-11-05 ch 1, | "You don’t need razors, just a phone". I loved that line. ~Heart of the Sword |
| Getuie 2003-11-04 ch 1, | This is also an amazing poem... I love the repetition "you don't need, you don't need..." but I think you left out the word need in "You don't (need) to cry alone"... I really like this |