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| PainKiller 2003-12-14 ch 1,   | You evoked this great feeling of broken-ness and vulnerablity with this piece. Wonderfully original with a perhaps trite concept that you made intriguing. Beautiful work, as usual. :) |
| Lidless Eye 2003-12-10 ch 1, | Powerful... compelling. Brilliant work! Keep it up. ~Lidless Eye |
| Werecat99 2003-11-30 ch 1, | Liked that as well. Angsty, but well written. |
| anthr-gift-4m-hvn 2003-11-07 ch 1, | whoa, girl, the part that actually really caught my attention was the graphic part (surpise, surprise) -that last line. great line. but i'm sry you feel this way, i also can relate to this, especially since this year i've been going to this school. it's hard for me, even now, into the 2nd quarter, to stay happy with my friends there. some of them i've found just aren't being worth it. |