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| PainKiller 2003-12-14 ch 1, | Wow... it's almost like an innocence poem... that was wonderful. It had a wonderful ambient feel, though this isn't music. The words you chose, such as 'longing', 'yearning', and 'desire' all gave that pleading sense of urgency for acceptance. Really, really nice work. |
| Lidless Eye 2003-12-10 ch 1, | Started excellent, ended excellent. I loved it, it was very emotional. Great job! ~Lidless Eye |
| anthr-gift-4m-hvn 2003-11-07 ch 1, | wow, i know what you mean, what you see...sometimes before i've caught myself doing what he does. but i've quickly figured out that i don't need the world's approval. not one bit! and i love that because you have to work to accomplish that and seriously i could care less! anyways, love the rhyming! great piece, babe! lol later! |
| Getuie 2003-11-04 ch 1, | Sad, but... powerful. Such a loving, dear emotion running through the soft words... beautiful |