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Reviews For: My Poor Little Boy

PainKiller
2003-12-14
ch 1,
Wow... it's almost like an innocence poem... that was wonderful. It had a wonderful ambient feel, though this isn't music. The words you chose, such as 'longing', 'yearning', and 'desire' all gave that pleading sense of urgency for acceptance. Really, really nice work.
Lidless Eye
2003-12-10
ch 1,
Started excellent, ended excellent. I loved it, it was very emotional. Great job!
~Lidless Eye
anthr-gift-4m-hvn
2003-11-07
ch 1,
wow, i know what you mean, what you see...sometimes before i've caught myself doing what he does. but i've quickly figured out that i don't need the world's approval. not one bit!
and i love that because you have to work to accomplish that and seriously i could care less! anyways, love the rhyming! great piece, babe! lol later!
Getuie
2003-11-04
ch 1,
Sad, but... powerful. Such a loving, dear emotion running through the soft words... beautiful
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