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| a-Leng 2004-03-16 ch 1,   | This is a cute poem, and as an eighteen year old it's almost the same as how I feel; a kid at heart. |
| MistrissD 2004-01-12 ch 1, | I felt the same way ^.^ only thing is...we can legally buy ciggs, lottery tickets, and **! hehe |
| sammy 2004-01-12 ch 1, | That is a lovely poem, i'm not looking forward to turning 18 because that meant responsablity, but i'm sure that your poem represents the truth and nothing will change |
| khenna 2004-01-09 ch 1, | Interesting, I like it! |
| Zero-Sum 2004-01-03 ch 1, | it looks like you just want to be a kid. who doesn't? ...not like i would know the difference... "everything's legal now!" [that's all i'm really waiting for :P] --> mysterykittyx |
| Cirien Phoenix 2003-11-25 ch 1, | So it doesn't really seem any different when you're 18? That's cool. This poem seems a little short and lacking on details. I suggest maybe trying to write a longer version as well. K? Good job though! ~Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame |
| Rosie 2003-11-17 ch 1, | Yep, so ture! I won't bother you again about your age... Nothing's chagned until you do somting radical like move out or drive |
| pippin tomson 2003-11-11 ch 1, | I've got ages to go till i'm eighteen, but I don't want to grow up! I'm glad everything seems the same, cus I like the world i'm in now This poem has a deffinate rythm to it. nice work ; ) |
| Andaren 2003-11-11 ch 1, | I've got all this to come in april, I suppose :) Good poem ... sorry this review is so short but the font on this computer is all whacky and I'm going to go before I'm tempted to put my foot through the monitor. Blessed Be, Andaren x |
| K. Evenstar 2003-11-10 ch 1, | It IS Nevernever land, isn't it? Coz I swear someone's been fiddling with history, me and my sister swear it is Never never land but in the films they just call it Never land. Her mate's doing Panto of Peter Pan and it is Never Never land in that. Disney must have got it wrong. Sorry that was a little random, wasn't it? Just pleased to find someone who agrees with me. :D - Big cheesy grin Lindiniel |
| Zainab 2003-11-07 ch 1, | EXACTLY! I'm not 18 yet, but I still feel like a kid. I don't want to grow up. How about going to nevernever land? hmm... Anyways... Good poem! I like the attitude, and the beat (it has this somewhat fast-paced beat to it) Good job! |