Hey, good going so far. I like the HGTTG feel of your novel. It's great tongue-in-cheek humor. I like how you come randomly out of nowhere with something like "Maria Alonsa Pepita Jose del los Santos" really made me laugh.

Couple things I noticed. IBALL was a real groaner for a joke, but it contributes to the feel of the story thus far. That and I don't think "alright" is a word.

Keep it up!

I hope you will take time to leave me a review. I am writing this novel for National Novel Writers Month (NaNoWriMo) and am attempting to post a new chapter everyday, enroute to 50,0 words by the end of November. If you like it, I'll begin editing in December!