Good Story. Are you planning on a sequel? I was kinda interested in what would happen during a summer with Eddie.

hey your story was kinda lame its started really good then you rushed the end, you put aload of crap that didn't make sence and the ending was kinda cofusing (sorry its the truth)

HAHAHA CUTE!

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i don't know what to say.But somewhere along the story you lost your touch.After sometime it kindda didn't intract with you like it did before.It didn't have enough romance in it .I mean she never actually fell in love.she didn't feel strongly for any guy she met.But still it was good and it showed us a chapter of life

Wow, I really love this story. It had me crying a LOT. Of course that may just be stupid hormones, awkward. Anyway, please update.

The number one problem with writing a story with many important characters: Remembering names.
For one, you switched from Jamie to Jaime in the middle somewhere and in the end you switched back.
For two there are several spots where you put the wrong name, a few of them made it really confusing.
For three, Wesley's girlfriend went from Cheryl to Gloria and back to Cheryl again.

Other than that, a decent story, it gets a bit confusing and haywire but life generally is. However, the closing is just too short and abrupt, it could use more work.

~Leena

great story. i hope leslie really likes her as a friend and matt is so much better than charles

fabulous story.

Wow, this was a great story. I totally enjoyed it. Jamie remained consistent in all of the chapters and I could really empathize with her. Awesome story. Keep writing!

Awesome Awesome Awesome

Aw, cute ending.

I like how it is not a definite ending to the story, how one does not know for sure what happens.

I liked the last couple of chapters (I won't review each one individually, as they are all very good).

I look forward to reading more of your work.

Take care,

* Books4mE *

i loved this story..great job. hope the sequel comes real soon

I forgot how ridiculous this story is LOL. I look forward to chapter 23.

Josiah.

update soon!

aw. mike always has to ruin everything. and yep, that was a long wait. i had to re-read some parts to understand what was happening.