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Reviews For: The Way Things Were
Hershey249 2003-11-06 . chapter 1
Simple, but effective. I like the way it seems to rock back and forth, almost like tide. I love the last line, it's innovative to say something fades by the brightest thing of all, but it's true. As the sun rises and falls, the last day fades. :) Really cool.
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