That is simply awesome. Well put, all of it is so well put that I don't think anyone else could manage to say it better. Very nice job here. Incredible work.
write on.

*Deep, heavy sigh* That was marvelous, and in my opinion, perhaps one of your best... I would have to say the reason is because it's SO expressive. You used perhaps what some would consider simple words to convey a much deeper meaning that human thought could only hope to fully explain. That being said, I'd have the say that your final stanza was a mini-masterpiece of a stanza. Wonderful, wonderful work. :)

so touching and inspiring! i really like the ending. keep writing for Him!

"Honest, unconditional/No matter what, I'll always fall/For Your sweet love"

I loved this.

thanks,
Lady E

Incredible work. I loved the formatting at the end. Keep on serving Him! ^_^


~Heart of the Sword

I must say that this has to be one of your best. I just love everything about it. It was beautiful, pure and simple. Excellent, excellent work.

~*~AbunaiChikara