I like it. It's nice, simple and sweet. Beautiful

Incredible. I could never say enough about this poem to capture what you poured into it. Good work.
write on.

Now, I'd already read this before you had posted this, so you already have somewhat of an idea of what I thihnk of it. However, after reading it again, I think that I really didn't see how amazing this poem really is. Firstly, the rhyming came off very fluidly, and pulled what could be perhaps an abstract theme into a base reality. Your wisdom here is astounding; I can not say enough about what you said and the way you said it. You make poetry like this look so easy when you run it off so simply. Again and again you amaze me, and yet when your next poem is posted, I'm amazed yet again. This is most certainly going in my favorites; just... wonderful piece. Perhaps my all-time favorite of yours, that or 'Red Clouds'.

beautiful piece... simply beautiful.

Your work is always a joy to read. This is no different.


~Heart of the Sword

Another beautiful poem. I quite enjoyed it. Simply splendid work.

~*~AbunaiChikara