Cute poem, don't think I agree with a couple, but good anyways.

I really like that. I personally would leave off the last stanza (if they are stanzas... they weren't formatted like it.) because it's kind of pounding the point. Besides, English teachers no longer have anything to discover in it. lol

absolutely agree, great poem, happiness is something we all seem to be forsakeing importance on these days~ Luved it~ ^^

~Never the same~

fun stuffs

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! It's so true!! All of it...except maybe the first bit since I WISH i was in band but i don't play a band instrument :( Replace it with a singing audition piece or maybe a piano exam for me hehe...I love it..it's such a feel good poem now. *flashes huge smile* Thankies!

Good job! That was so sweet. I loved it.

Melodic, beautiful word. Your point is extremely well spoken, and I'm just sorry that I haven't done as many things in that list that I would of wanted to. And yes, reading your poetry makes me happy. As long as you keep doing it anyways (mwa ha ha blackmail) *smiles*

*applause*

this is great! it just makes me smile every time i read it, and that's what makes a great poem. you have a gift for poetry and making people smile. good job.