Ah its been long time >> school and all ye si reviewed before but Akabane is my new name so bah ^^; anyways...Stubborn is good -nods- slash ish good too and -cries hugging- THIS IS AWESOME! U have really good characters and emotiosn and the plot is really original but u should lengthen it out a bit and -bounces- amking me happy ^^ keep up the great work!

O cool i see lots of promace for a Great plot!! Aghh, Need MORE! *Clings to ya* that was just enough to make me want alot more... *whines* you got more? *Puppy eyes. wants more of the slash* Write! MORE! ^_^ *glomps*

It's got good ideas behind it, especially of angels being gay. Your tenses should probably be more carefully checked and the sentence 'Tom stiffened, acting as if she had just called him the son of a ** and a bastard and that she never wanted to see him again' doesn't run too smoothly, so try revising it. Your dialouge is otherwise pretty good.

i like this i really do it sounds really interesting plz continue soon! *bounces* yay slash ^^

Nice dialog between the Mrs. Smith and Tom! interesting conflict with Tom so far. not enough thow for me to really say. I would to see it once you have more. K? ^_^