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| the-irony-is-u-dont-love-me 2007-01-14 ch 1, | that was kewl, good.. ethic.. i think thats the word im looking for |
| Systole 2004-05-30 ch 1, | needs more editing, and some length. But it is good, more details would make it better, and readers such as myself happier! |
| psychochick4life 2004-01-24 ch 1, | i really liked it. im not sure how to describe it but it is wonderful! keep writing please! i need more demonic stories!! |
| Something from Nothing 2003-11-14 ch 1, | That was sad. I liked how you never told names, because that might have taken out of the story a little bit. I wondered a little about him, but that's how the story was written, right? ok then. |