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| AntiPleasure 2003-12-13 ch 1,   | Good choice of words, especially for the title. I just have to say it's beautiful and well written. I enjoyed very much. *Jenna* |
| IHJ 2003-11-05 ch 1, | Oh, wow. This is extremely well written. I can't say I completely understand what you're saying (since symbolism/metaphorical language usually goes over my head) but it's maturely written and just...whoa... Having it begin with "And" kinda put me off, but I like it. Seems like you're in the middle of observing the worthless ones and the beautiful ones. Great poem! Izzy J. |