cool... reminds me of that roleplay thing jess did on halloween... "let us call it... a donation"

me like

Nicely written. I like the repetition of "Her (something), too (adjective)". I can imagine her whispering huskily, a bit daringly "Come, my darling. Come." Some phrases are a bit cliche - burning eyes, swinging hips - but overall it's a good poem.

Izzy J.