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Sammy- B 2004-03-23 ch 1,	awe- it's a mixture of sad and sweet and VERY VERY GOOD. Awesome work, really. Oh, and I understand about the reviews, hint, hint No, I'm just kidding. Or am I? Yes, I am. Or am I? Yes, I am. Or am I? Ok, I'm done. I'm a tid bit hyper( if you couldnt tell) and whenm I get hyper I get to rambling, and OH! There I go again! uh-hem I'm done.
HushedIceColdFears 2004-02-03 ch 1,	Awesome, awesome, awesome poem! I like it a lot! Wow. lol.
amethystdawn 2003-12-15 ch 1,	Wow. blinks I have no idea how to comment. It's so good. I'm just stunned. ^_^ P.S If you have the time, can you review my work? Please. But you don't have to if you don't want to.
Aryante 2003-12-05 ch 1,	oh. prettyful. i like muchly. is god. yeah, i'm kinda hyper at the moment, ignore me.
J.T. Baever 2003-12-04 ch 1,	Beautiful. That was some of the best work i've seen in this here poetry section. Amazing job, very very awesome stuff. Write more. ~Beaver
Krikoris 2003-11-29 ch 1,	I know, kids these days, it beats the bag alright. Yes well, onto the review. The poem had a lot of meaning to me for some reason, I took it to heart. The last line was real touching, wrapped up the whole thing real well. Krikoris
Katterree Fengari 2003-11-26 ch 1,	hmm...sorta odd...I'm wondering what you mean by the title... O, also, this poem sorta reminded me of Draco...not sure, moreso the char. you find in fics than the books, and mostly based on the second stanza.. lovely last line...connecting the subject person to the speaker
the insane floo pot 2003-11-26 ch 1,	Hee, hey there, it's okay, you can stop winking now! Oh and you're so right burn, it's totally a fun word... burn, burn, burn! Okay I'm done bites lip yep.. bur.. I'm done! And it is a thing of etiquette... and I can so that now becasue I've only just found out what it is... aren't dictionaries fun!?! Especially the cute lickle ickle pocket size ones! WOW! yOuCaNttoUcHmE I'm absolubtly in love with this poem of yours! It's filled with such amazingly strong images and powerful symbolisim to! "You’re falling, searching, crawling, And it’s too late to turn around" - For osme unknown reason to me... I LOVE that line... don't ask me why, just do! Huh, it's a mystery! Oh and thankyou so much for reviewing my poem hunny! I'm soo glad you liked it! Well until next time... See ya!
Ezzara Santo'Caballero 2003-11-25 ch 1,	Wonderful. Love the imagery "walking into the sun." Brilliant. Thanks for reviewing one of mine, came here to return the favor. Keep writing :) "Follow your heart, follow your pen." - Ezz
MorganceBlade 2003-11-14 ch 1,	this is a really a powerful poem...i really love it! keep up the groovy work! thanx for reviewing my work >mb
Madrynea 2003-11-14 ch 1,	Yes, it IS a thing of etiquette, and far too few people are following the unwritten rules. :) So I stopped by to take a look at your work. I write very little poetry myself, but I enjoyed this one. I generally prefer poems with proper rhymes and perfect rhythm, but only for the reason that too many suicide-endangered teenage girls put their diary entries into poem form and think that makes a poem. It doesn't. This, however, is a piece of art, if you want my opinion. It doesn't need perfect metric, actually, the lack of it makes a part of the poem. If forced into a stiff rhyme, it would probably lose a lot of its charm. This would be perfect for analyzing at school (not that we'd want to), but I believe it has a special meaning for each individual reading it. It does for me! Keep up the good work. :)
Ellerfru 2003-11-14 ch 1,	It could use some metric, but it's really good.
hateforfree 2003-11-09 ch 1,	This is really GOOD! "You show them all you are, And all the perfect things you see, But you’re slowly losing ground, Over the perfect you can’t be." I loved that. Keep it up, you have real talent.
Heather Montgomery 2003-11-09 ch 1,	I really like this poem. It's very powerful. I especially like "But you’re slowly losing ground,/ Over the perfect you can’t be." It's so.. well, it's perfectly said. Great job!
Etheral 2003-11-07 ch 1,	This is great! I love it! Great ending! -Alyssha

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