Nicely done.. really captures the moment. you're going to have to get your ass online so you can read this striking review of your striking poem.

Wow. O_O This is god!- But sad as well. -_-

It's scary that people can really think like that. It makes you wonder why they feel they have to do that to themselves'. I think it was well done, trying to see it from the perspective of someone who does cut themself. Your previous reviewers don't seem to realize that. To some people, it is an 'art' and it is disgusting, but that's how they think and that's why they do it.

All in all, I think it was well done.

It would be more effective if you used that most wondrous invention: spellchecker.

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That's a lot of spelling mistakes for a short poem. Oh well - another healthy dose of good old apathy is just what FictionPress needs.

Please note that "it's" should be "its" in all instances here. "It's" is a contraction for "it is," while "its" is a possessive form.

Some people may compliment you but I feel this poem is in the wrong direction. It's wrong to make a horrible and disgusting addiction into something beautiful. Art and self-injury cannot co-exist.

Very cool, you amaze me