Hi! this is the second of your poems that i have read (the first being My Mask). I also enjoyed this on, perhaps not as much as the other but still!
You have again captured the moment, the only thing that didn't 'please me' (!) was the ending..but now I read it again..it's perfect! Don't know what that was!
Well done again! :)
From Amy

Very cool. Written very well. Picks up well. I like it.

W,

The Great, the Mighty, the Orc King

Hm. Good choice of words, some are a bit cliche, but hardly makes a difference. Maybe it's because I'm reading this at 3:35 pm so it doesn't really affect me as much, but I'm sure if I read it at night, I'd get a bit freaked out. Nice job!

Izzy J.