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Calvin Wong 2004-07-19 ch 1,	Life as defined by what falls under the keyboard fingers. That's how I see this poem; a mood captured through words you find suited; imagery conveyed through the 26 letters. It's not a poem so much as a story, a short glimpse of the state of mind. Or it's just me rambling because I can't see the connections. :)
Martinet Of the Order 2004-06-30 ch 1,	The message is very heartfelt, abit too abstract for me, I can't quite sort it out, but hey, i'm young. Rhythmic, very smooth. Cheers.
Werecat99 2004-01-02 ch 1,	I loved this. There was a sense of sweet surrender flowing from every word. Good work.
Dirty Wallpaper 2003-11-29 ch 1,	beautiful! i loved the strong and emhasising imagery, it really made the poem what it was, teh atmosphere, the over all emotion... the meaning behind the poem was priceless, something everyone needs to know and learn...and the "let go" theme was a great way to bring it out. ok, there was one stanza which really spoke to me, one which i thought was utterly amazing in everything that it was... "Let go of the hand. Wind stifles the screams, Plummeting down until Bone is shattered by Crude, jagged rocks." i especially loved that second line, so restricting. great poem, i really do adore, kudos!
light of middle earth 2003-11-29 ch 1,	Hi, Hey, hey. This is good, really good. Unconventional, not in the usual everything must rhyme pattern which i find so hard to break out of. I like this a lot because it is different yet based on a normal subject, Well done, McD
thegildedrose 2003-11-24 ch 1,	I've been in a nostalgic mood lately also, and that made me really like this. I especially like "Let go of the hand..." that entire stanza really hits me. There are a few places where the flow seems to be interupted, but other than that I really like it. Keep writing! ~~thegildedrose~~
JJR Meerraf 2003-11-22 ch 1,	Great stuff! It rhymed and flowed so well! Keep it up!
Aimee Raven 2003-11-21 ch 1,	hey...oh..how come I haven't reviewed this before? This is the best imagery I've sen you write..and one of the best I've ever seen...it's really deep...strong imagery! Let go of the reins. Control is lost of the beasts, Sedate pace speeds until The outside whirls by in a Wild, furious frenzy. It...it shows strenght, passion, it's very vivid! Sorry for not reviewing before..dunno y i didnt. Love, Mia
Carter Tachikawa-not logged... 2003-11-20 ch 1,	Well-written poem. I love the way that you structured it. It was kinda sad but that's okay. It was good. Keep writing. ~CT
Gemema 2003-11-17 ch 1,	Kinda sad...but written really well. The poem flows together really well, and you've done an excellent job with it!
Silent Scars 2003-11-15 ch 1,	I love the words that you've used to express the situation, very descriptive and shows a great deal of emotions. I love the hidden meaning towards it; it isn't just what it's plainly said but something more. Nice Job!
aleppine 2003-11-12 ch 1,	There is so much movement to relish in this ... 'Let go of your breath' was brilliant. For that matter, that second stanza is my firm favourite. The language throughout this changes from vivid to surreal to distinct, but that stanza was the best, for me. I think you've really achieved the essence of letting go in this. Well done. And, oh look, I am way too full of good things to say. OOps. searches for criticism ... fails*
End Of The Innocence 2003-11-10 ch 1,	Wow. Now this one is truely superb! Keep this up! I love the repetition.
Ayanlu 2003-11-10 ch 1,	Very nice, open mic poetry it is it seems. I liked it...and read it several ways and liked them everyway. THANKs for writing this poem.
Freeelancer 2003-11-10 ch 1,	NIce... i like it, it's very nice to read, i mean, it gives you this...feeling when you do. great job here, well done. chrys

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