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| ConfuseDAngel 2003-11-13 ch 1,   | "Tonight, I say goodbye" Another masterpiece brought to by VictorSoulstorm. Again Iam commentless, your description of her is really fascinating and very passionate. I think i'm already getting an ispiration..hope it works out! |
| Miyabi-chan 2003-11-10 ch 1, | MUCH better! I like how you described her. Now I AM the ONLY person to review ALL OF YOUR STORIES! *laughs insanely* : ) |
| mnemonexus 2003-11-08 ch 1, | woah... damn! that's... er... mentally powerful. *stunned* |
| Ellerfru 2003-11-08 ch 1, | Your style is very out of the ordinary and definitely good. It reads itself like a mixture of metric and freeverse poetry. I love it. :) |
| Ishuzu 2003-11-08 ch 1, | "Tonight let it rain roses" An eerily romantic way to express your sadness and distaste. Definitely my favorite line. I liked part two better then part one, I think. Really a subject of interest for a "love" poem... Please continue Thank you for reviewing all of my poems. *blush* I'm so glad someone likes them. I haven't written one in a while but I feel like writing now. |
| Chaotic Ellipsis 2003-11-07 ch 1, | Again, all I can say is wow. You have a gift, that's very evident. ^^ I enjoyed your work, please keep up the excellent work adn I assure you'll have readers for it all. Good job -Chaotic Ellipsis |
| O-o The Orange Moose o-O 2003-11-06 ch 1, | Oh, wow. This is beautiful... o.o I love it! So pretty... I love that "And no matter how much I love you I'll always hate you more" part. Simply brilliant. o-o; And thank you for reviewing; you're so nice! ^_^. XD.oo.o; Glad to see it's not too pathetic ^-6.. And hope prevails! |
| MiNt-BrEaTh 2003-11-06 ch 1, | wow! hm...did you just break up with your girlfriend? that's what this poem reminds me of, when me and Eric broke up... I LOVE IT! |
| Jesi Lynna 2003-11-06 ch 1, | This was so awesome. It fit mine like a glove! my second part is the exact opposite to yours.. I wonder why we were compelled to write these? There's so much dramatic irony here... |
| Incubabe 2003-11-06 ch 1, | This is even better than the first... I don't know what it is about the language you use but it's so seductive. It just draws you in and doesn't let go. "I let the tears flow down my face But they cannot wash my soul" and "And no matter how I love you I'll always hate you more" Perfection itself! |