-i like all the metaphors and the grassy person is very funny! lol! ) nice job here! i can see u used a lot of effort here!

I apologize if I made you feel down about yourself - I am only being honest with you. I think honesty is much better than being lied to.

I am glad to see that you are doing better. )

"quit" should be "quiet".

The line "only a place where I can only find my true grassy self." made me chuckle a little, because it immediately brought the image of a person made of grass to my head...and that's a pretty funny image. ;

"The philosophy of love" is a good line.

The ending is good, too.

Keep writing!

Namir Swiftpaw

hiya! this is a nice poem, with good imagery! good idea! just wondering- is the second line down meant to be 'quiet meadow'?

good job

cya )