i know u lilyqueen7, duh u don't believein destiny, and u think u lead ur own life! it is an ok poem, but u could have improved by doing it simpler (the lines) or make it shorter? all well, over all it's ok.

Hi! I'm glad you're writing again! Sadly to say that no one is the perfect poet, but people still cna be outstanding poets!

I also believe in destiny. But i don't like the fact that somebody else may be controlling it. I want to control my own life! *shakes fist at heavens* stay out of my life! Hehe. Okay, onto the other new poems!