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| poetic abortion 2005-01-24 ch 1,   | o.o I think you have something here. please update !! I truelly enjoyed this. Got me spooked. ~* Noelle *~ |
| Figure 2004-07-18 ch 1, | Oh, chilling. *grins* This is one of the best horror stories I've ever read, even if I had to read it twice to take it in fully. I do that, you know - skip parts of the story in order to read what happens next. Heh heh... A truly evil story. What a twisted woman... *shudders* I'm never taking piano again, I prefer typing anyway. Whatever. You've given me nightmares now. But it's an excellent story, you're really good at writing horror. Seeya Later! -Figure |
| Hangman 2004-06-05 ch 1, | wow, that was gripping! *smiles psychotically*. Very nice, very nice. I read to the end of that one, good pacing, good description if a little too much for my taste its had a lot of polish (sp?), I dont know if the moral of the story is very comforting (or intelligent), I used to play piano and my teachers said I had good pianist fingers =\ and I never practiced... I think I hear someone.. have to - AH jk good work. Very good work. Cam. |
| Endless Nightmares 2004-02-16 ch 1, | Wow!- Sad, eerie, and well written story. Well done! Whispers In Silence |
| Raikua 2004-01-27 ch 1, | ~...Disturbing. Very. Yummy fingers! ^-^ I used to take piano lessons, but my teacher wasn't as insane. Very disturbing. Keep writing! ~ |
| Charlie86 2003-12-02 ch 1, | A very disturbing short story!, but most importantly very well written. The way you described everything was really good and you have a really good way of keeping a reader in suspense. Well done! |
| Mac Attack 2003-11-20 ch 1, | kinda weird. very descriptive. Like the end. She ate fingers. Gross. I hope she washed them first, you never know where little boy fingers have been. For all she knows right before she ate them they could have been picking a booger or retrieving whitie tighties from the crack of his butt. Now thats just not a pleasant picture...think of all the germs she was consuming. what if the boy urinated all over his hands while he went upstairs to go to the bathroom? hmm...maybe it makes the cookies taste a bit like lemon? i dunno. Good story though. |
| taehyun 2003-11-08 ch 1, | Very... well written and equally disturbing. Great piece here. Ja Ne. |
| don juan banana 2003-11-06 ch 1, | Oh my gosh...first and foremost, ew. Sorry, haha. But she ate the fingers! But besides that, this was amazing. I loved every detailed description and I could visualize everything in my mind. You've got talent. |
| TheRainbowScentedPlatypus 2003-11-06 ch 1, | ooh..very creepy. I like how you describe things in this story. |