Oh!! Cassie this is a wonderful story! Do continue writing it. I love how you compare the who thing to a play on stage, it's awsome!!

Awesome. I really like your relation to the curtain and the stage. It really adds to the story. Keep writing. You are a very talented writer.

hhey!
listen this story is AMAZING!
I love the character of Brair...

It's amaizing how ignorant people can be. To think you could change someone's mind by torturing them! Still, keep writing...

OOhh, update soon!

great job keep writing.

This just keeps getting better :)

I like, it! the only complaint I have is lack of detail, but hey, you get your point across. It's very well-written. Nothing less from Cass-7!

Hey, really good! Are you going to write more? I hope you write more because, this is so awsome! Good work! :)