WAAAAAAAAHHHH! WHY MUST YOU DO THIS TO ME! JUST WHEN IT WAS GETTING GOOD TOO! MY GODDESS!
By the way, I'm pretty sure you can get this published. I mean, I'm not even sure if Harry Potter was this good!(And those were pretty freakin' AWESOME!)
And CURSE whats-his-name for raping Aphredia! CURSE YOU!
I'm still talking about whats-his-name when I say curse you.
But can we write FanFictions when it IS finished and published?0_o
Also, are you going to call the book 'Royal Trepidations'? I
HAVE FUN!
That's what this shtuff is for, right? Yes, I meant to say shtuff.

Hooked on this :D hope u update soon I can't wait

NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO WHERE'S THE NEXT CHAPTER?

Ahem. Well, I loved this story, and the plot is great. I hope you keep on writing! :D

Ha! I am ten years old, and yet my chapters are not childish... I think. But I am confident in your story... :D This is a useless review, isn't it?

Jesus. Christ. You sir are gifted. Or maam. I don't know, but I wish I could write like you.

I really enjoy your story. I love the diverged plot and your style of story development. Update soon!

Ooh, I know you haven't updated in forever, but I still have hope! You can do it! Fighting!

Im so excited! I cant wait to read on! :D

Sometimes terms in this story like high mage confuse me, because I dont understand a lot about the magic world, but I think Im doing a pretty good job at keeping up. This story is amazing.

I really like Sadire. :)

Well done :D

A water element is really cool :)

I love this chapter. It makes me really want to write a story about like a magic world too, but dont worry if I ever did do that I wouldt rip off your plot. Id have my own characters and story-line. :P

LOL I was practically yelling at my computer earlier in my chapter for Aradia not to open the door. XD

Amazing chapter. I really love this story so far! :D