I really enjoyed your story so far. Somehow though it reminds me a little of World of Warcraft, but not in any bad way. Perhaps you can work on adding more depth to some of your characters. Some of them are rather predictable. Your style of writing is very clear and pleasing to read. Keep it up and update soon (:

I like your story-it has the right element of lighthearted humour and romance, as well as fiction.
please update soon

hi there!

i know this story is kinda old already [last time i saw, it was update last 2008] but please [pretty please] continue this story. this is a very good story...

i was searching for a romance novel when i found this site...
i was amazed on how your love story works...
please continue it.
its really good.
keep up the good work. :3

Is this story on Hiatus or something?
Please update!

have you fallen off the face of the earth? update soon!

well hello there! i must say i LOVE ThIS STORY!! and i am very sad that you have not updated in such a long time... please come back!

I have just got done reading what you have wrote so far and i was just wondering when you would update again?

gahh!! i love this story!! i stumbled across it a couple of hours ago and i'm addicted. please update soon!! :)

Hi,
I can't blame you for sporadic (that's not spelt right, is it?) updating. I've tried my hand at writing for fanfiction, and life always seems to take over somewhat. I am an awful updater, so how can I be annoyed at you for it?
I'm enjoying reading this, and it interesting to see that this is but an outline. I think it has an awful lot of potential. I would be very interested to see how it turns out.
However, I think it can be slightly confusing with the rather quick changes of location and characters. Perhaps in the actual version, these would be padded out to become chapters? I think that would be easier to read and understand.
I'm also struggling slightly with some of the pronounciations. For example, Hephestia. Should it be pronounced 'Hef-sti-a', 'Hef-e-sti-a', 'Heef-sti-a', or any other variation? This isn't really a major thing, but I find it quite disrupting when reading, especially as I enjoy reading things aloud.
I'm starting to wonder whether we might have a Levinia/Leones romance on our hands, leaving Selenor and, oh no, I've forgotten her name. I'm sorry! It begins with an 'A'...
Well, as much as I just told you I could understand you not updating that commonly, I would to see an update...
Bookflower

Love it so far, update as soon as possible!

argghh you just had to stop at a good part. Why does this have to happen? Can you please come back? You need to finish this!!

AW! ^^ They're FINALLY together now! Please don't leave me to die in a long wait, update soon! I honestly need more of Aradia and Torrine.

what happened to see you next month?

hope life isn't too stressfull, and that you're still writing

by the way, I thought her grandfather was an elemental mage too, if he was, her being the first in a century means her grandfather had kids when he was about 40, as did her parents (or another combo which adds to about 80). It's not impossible, just rather unlikely

I love that you didn't just skip straight away or just take exerpts from random years, you gave me a sense of who these people were. Ok occaisionally it felt a bit forced but it probably served it's purpose and how close they are after the time jump won't seem as weird.