Reviews for Royal Trepidations

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Youhadxme 2008-11-04 ch 27,	please update. this story is too good to just stop here. :]
Lover of ALL Books 2008-10-06 ch 27,	Just wondering... What happened to updating every month?
Fairytale Rescue 2008-09-30 ch 27,	Please, please, PLEASE update! I need to know what happens next! Especially now that Torrine and Aradia are together...
Reader 2008-09-26 ch 27,	no... what happened to our monthly updates... if you want to discontinue... can you just write the last chapter.. the tie up one? sum up the war and then torrine and aradia can be together!! rofl well do whatever you want.. good luck to you in the future with any of your writings and reality
RunFree 2008-09-17 ch 27,	Good...update soon
Icestreak 2008-08-24 ch 27,	UPDATE MORE! i luv this story
McShortShort 2008-07-27 ch 27,	wow i really like this story hopefully you'll update soon
entity.unkown 2008-07-09 ch 27,	judging by the last update, it's been past...almost four months now. xD no pressure, just my addiction to your story speaking out. but good chapter anyways =]
entity.unkown 2008-07-09 ch 26,	personally, though i did enjoy 'queen of glass', i enjoyed your story more. i think i was put off by the main characters' offhand regard of...intimacy. your writing is very smooth, so far, i haven't come across an awkward sentence. keep writing!
For What Its Worth 2008-07-02 ch 27,	Well, you certainly weren't exaggerating when you said the first lot of chapters were not to be used as a basis to judge the rest of the content. Though it wasn't QUITE as bad as you made it seem. I was really cringing for a bit. :) The soldiers' hope of the union of Torrine and Ara is hilarious. Not as hilarious as Torrine determined to stand aside for Leones, though. That was a work of art. Evidence of two competent generals. I did notice that Leones didn't tell the Light of Hephestia that Crown Prince Vicant was the one doing the usurping. It wouldn't have been at all conducive to winning the aid of their army. Maerdon is absent. Yet his grandson grew up with the prince. One wonders who his son is. And whether that was a spark when Leones and Princess Light met. Well, until you next update! :)
anonymous 2008-06-22 ch 27,	Please keep writing. I really like reading this story and am really intrigued as to how it will end.
J.T. Baever 2008-04-06 ch 27,	Wow...okay. It HAS been a while. Hi! D'you remember me from eons ago? I'm Baever/Beaver (though really not so much anymore, to be honest) So where to begin? I guess first off, I'll start by congratulating you on your MARVELOUS RETURN! HOORAYY! You have no idea how happy I am that you've started writing here again. I'm happy for your readers but especially happy for you. And proud too, of course. :D And I know it sounds odd, but I feel like a stranger here now. I don't come here anymore, and by some strange stroke of luck I found your update randomly out of the blue today. And honestly, after I type this to you I will most likely disappear. I haven't written anything for FP in years and doubt I ever will again. I don't think I'm cut out for the FictionPress crowd anymore. In fact, I'll probably delete my account soon. But I hope you never will. I hope you stay and finish your wonderful story and write and rewrite and rewrite until it makes it to a bookstore shelf. I hope you've grown much in yourself and your writing during these past few years as I have and continue to do so. And lastly, I hope you remember that YOU are who you write for. Readers are wonderful, certainly, but they should never be your primary motivation. Don't let anything sway you from the story you want to tell. Let it be for your love that the words be put on paper (computer screen, word processor, what have you, etc.) It's comforting knowing that you're back. Truly, I feel quite blessed to read you again and to know that you still write. KEEP WRITING! I don't think I got the chance to fully encourage you before. ;) Always your friend in words, J.T. Baever (though it's not really my pen name so much anymore, to be honest) :D Oh!...and update soon.
Essie 2008-04-03 ch 27,	Woah!! 2 years!! Somehow i still remember vaguely what this story is about but if you gave us a brief summary of all the chapters and what has happened so far that would be ebtter. Welcome back!
rosieroo 2008-03-20 ch 1,	well then, ive decided to reread it!! IM SO HAPPY UR BACK!! i would start reading now, but its midnight and i need to be up early tomorrow. by the way, i was doing happy dances around the room when i found out you had updated!! YOU R SO AWESOME!
MZ PEACHESZZ 2008-03-18 ch 1,	My review was supposed to say one thousand plus reviews but FP is retarded sometimes. My bad! Also, think about character interaction development- so not just between T and A but between A and her father or some character that may not be in love with her but is still important in the scheme of things. At this point, it is more about injecting realism into your story. Looking forward to the next update!

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