Please update soon. This story rocks and needs to be updated as soon as you can

Hey, i started reading your story last night (at around 2 in the morning) and got hooked and refused to do anything vital (eat, sleep, drink) until i finished it. I want to say update soon but i read you important note and realized that you updating pattern is 'sporadic' so i'll just wait until your update.

Aries

So, we are to expect an other chapter out soon right? Cause I really want to finish reading this story. Its so interesting and I really like it. I check up on it from time to time, so I hope to see one soon!

My computer is telling me that chapters 27-35 do not exist. This probably has to do with the bugs in Fiction Press that you already know about, but I have been gone for awhile and so these may be different problems. So happy you are updating again, love this story, can't wait until the new chapters do love, a reader that is too lazy to login right now

i ablsolutely love your story! Where do you come up with this stuff? Waiting for your next post :D...could u add me to your posting list? My email is

Love the story!:):):)

ooh i really wanna c wat aradia looks like!

I find it hilarious that you have kept Torrine from knowing Leones true loyalty to Aradia. Keep up the good work!

You're Back! It's really good I went back over past reviews and found this!

Even though I am pissed about the long waits (who wouldn't be?) There is no way I could stop reading this story! YOu have one reader here and for good! So if there isn't enough of my fellow readers reading it my email is and by the way I would love to read some (or all) of the "real" or complete non outline story!

So update soon! I miss this story, and I'm off to reread the story!

Lovely story. It's one of the best here on fictionpress, in my opinion. You have a thick plot, all sorts of different characters who are set in a believeable fantasy world. Keep up the fantastic work.

As for the updating thing, update whenever, so long as you get the story done. I've tried to start writing my own stories out, but I couldn't; the updating thing was just too much. I never liked writing chapters that were short, but if I wrote the way I wanted to, I didn't really have enough time to write each chapter.

If that makes sense, anyway. Like I said, keep up the great work, and update... Eventually. P

so much for a few days, eh?

get sidetracked much? ;p

Okay, well, please update soon! ;p

It is an excellent story I hope you continue it.

update as sporadically as you want to you won't lose me... your story is one of the best stories i'm readin at the moment which i'm readin like around 40 stories atm (at least on this site)... mainly cuz almost all the writers on this site update sporadically some more sporadically than others... and btw you're one of the better updaters... but thanks for not quittin the site i've started way too many stories where the writers quit the site because they were pestered to update too much... and generally they left at a bad time in the story... oh, well, just thought i'd let you know your story is appreciated.

nekati senhorita

Well I hop you update..no matter how long it takes..just update and finish the story. Some of us are still waiting faithfully for this storie to finish no matter how long it takes

update as sporadically as you want

each writer has to finish things in their own time

i'll keep on reading your stories though i may review with different names

just letting you know you have one faithful reader!

i'v also read the other stories by myrika and s. . you write in a way that is your own and you shouldn't be pressured to write differently.

keep on truckin'

luv yaz