While this may be depressing, I still like it. The repetition works well. I like the way you describe that when someone is deceived, they are more likely to become a deceiver. It's so true. Nice job.

excellent poem... the only thing i *don't* like about it is the phrase "your turn to cry..." i don't know why, but it strikes me as cliched. that's my problem, not yours. this is great.

Wow. That is really good. I have been hurt by a lot of people. Guys and girls both. I take it that you probably had someone hurt you? Well I know the feeling. Again great job. Keep up the good work.