very nicely written. simple and clear. -ira

Usually I like to find at least one thing I don't like about a poem so that my reviews seem at least a bit helpful, but you've nailed this. I love the smooth transition from one topic to another. I don't think I can say anything else that hasn't already been said. This is great!

O_O you have alot of poems! I wanted to read all of them. Your going on my favorite autors list, and I'm going to somehow read all of you things... someday, somehow. Your really good. _ yay!

Lovely piece. It sort of trapped me for a while there. I really felt it. Nicely done.

Beautiful. That's the only way to put it. Wonderful piece of work, simple but well written.

i understand your menaing in this poem. i found it very moving and it blew me away.
the unholy one

Wow. This has to be one of the most emotional poems that I have ever read in my life. And it is so true, as well. This is a great poem.

Among all the slosh here at fiction press, this is definitly not one of them. You use spacing to your advantage. Good job.

Great analogy. And so true, too.

wow. that is incredibly deep. love it.

I love how you relate it to rain, but maybe that's just because I

seems like you over punctuated the poem, but other than that its pretty good! I thought the feeling in this poem was strong and meaninful.
plz r.r

Ironic that someone named "Infinite Smiles" could sound so sad. I know what you mean in this poem.

love the explanation of how love stains you... well done. 2 thumbs up.
DDT

i like the intensity in this poem...and how you maintain structure in the poem. very effective. powerful ending too. good work.