|Reviews for Stained|
| ira 5/28/11 . chapter 1
very nicely written. simple and clear. -ira
| Grayhome 3/11/07 . chapter 1
Usually I like to find at least one thing I don't like about a poem so that my reviews seem at least a bit helpful, but you've nailed this. I love the smooth transition from one topic to another. I don't think I can say anything else that hasn't already been said. This is great!
| Glassed Rose 9/28/04 . chapter 1
O_O you have alot of poems! I wanted to read all of them. Your going on my favorite autors list, and I'm going to somehow read all of you things... someday, somehow. Your really good. _ yay!
| Ela-chan 6/27/04 . chapter 1
Lovely piece. It sort of trapped me for a while there. I really felt it. Nicely done.
| fangedmajesty 6/8/04 . chapter 1
Beautiful. That's the only way to put it. Wonderful piece of work, simple but well written.
| The holy One 6/6/04 . chapter 1
i understand your menaing in this poem. i found it very moving and it blew me away.
the unholy one
| Child of the Sky 5/24/04 . chapter 1
Wow. This has to be one of the most emotional poems that I have ever read in my life. And it is so true, as well. This is a great poem.
| Jennacharm 4/23/04 . chapter 1
Among all the slosh here at fiction press, this is definitly not one of them. You use spacing to your advantage. Good job.
| Incrys 4/12/04 . chapter 1
Great analogy. And so true, too.
| LaTierraSutil 3/22/04 . chapter 1
wow. that is incredibly deep. love it.
| CydCharisse 3/18/04 . chapter 1
I love how you relate it to rain, but maybe that's just because I
| AngelaiR 3/17/04 . chapter 1
seems like you over punctuated the poem, but other than that its pretty good! I thought the feeling in this poem was strong and meaninful.
| Blackout the Swordsman 3/15/04 . chapter 1
Ironic that someone named "Infinite Smiles" could sound so sad. I know what you mean in this poem.
| DrenchedDrumTech 3/11/04 . chapter 1
love the explanation of how love stains you... well done. 2 thumbs up.
| bach-player 3/9/04 . chapter 1
i like the intensity in this poem...and how you maintain structure in the poem. very effective. powerful ending too. good work.