It is very nice... It says a lot about people need love, even if at the end, someone is broken is pices but never gets enough of love...

wow! this was really good. yay! go you! *holds up peace sign* You rock!

I sighed with longing for something I don't know right after I finished that. Precious piece.

Another good poem, nice original ending path.
Nine Iron

I know what you mean. This poem sums up the deeper side of love pretty accurately.

good subject, however the last line, in my opinion, did not maintain the driving intensity of the rest of the poem. consider revising.

wonderful! you are so incredible! i love your poems!

I like the final lines, really god emotion! I find that this poem could be a chapter of the last one.

very good poem. i would of liked a diff. ending, a stronger one, the whole poem is very powerful, ending sounds kind of weak, ending let me down,

I liked it a lot, I think it is really deep and sentimental. Great work!